VERY interesting. It appears that you have lots of tallent. Congrats. :)
This is a very odd sounding song. Its closer to DnB than anything else, but not really DnB to me.(What do i know...)
I like it but it got WAY to repetitive. Id work on that, then I'd start cleaning your shoes and washing your car.
Something else that i noticed was the ending. It was uhhh, interesting. It just kinda ended. I also have a problem with that, my songs just kinda END.
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DEFINATELY your best to date! Not doubt about it!!!
The synth choice was great! (Keep it up). Everyone is correct on this!!! It should be top 5 for a week.
GREAT job man!!!
Thanks for the comment, when i hear good and bad comments it helps me decide which style of music to lean toward :).
Not sure about the best 2 date-
but it was definately up there!!! :)
Congrats on making awsome songs dude!!!
I really have nothing else to comment on! It was all 2 perfect!!! ;)
thanks man, you rock. and ya your right, In The Clouds is alot better.
5/5 from me
I must say. The sounds were excellently used. Congrats. (the intro sucked but I forgot about it when the melody came in :p ) The voices were extremely koo.
Congrats on this bad ass song and I look forward to listening you future songs!!! :)
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thanks, I know the intro is a little iffy, but I will try and fix it and re-upload the fixed version.
I like this one. Would happen to have this saved on FL by chance? With your permission Id like to remix this. Id let you post it, but youd have to put my name in the description box.
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(the following is just an opinion by some dude)
The melody sounded good. When it came it and the drum 'beat' cut out it sounded very relaxing. The sounds were perfect for that. Congrats...
Lets be honest here. How lond did you spend on this??? Maybe about an hour or 2? Cause thats kinda what it sounds like.
The intro, (no offense) sucked, horrably... It was like, 10 measures long. Just a little TOO long for a drum pattern that adds a 'new' sound every 2-4 measures. Let it kinda start with a melody. Then add the drum beat.
Try to spend some time on your stuff plz.
Thx for reading this long review!
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Ehm, the problem is i can't edit music with FL and this was the only part of the music i had.
And i know the rhythm was too long but i have problems with creating a good one.
When i tried to add other melodys it didn't sounded peaceful anymore.
And it is a bit hard to make really good music because you must spend alot of hours in it that i can't do because my computer is going to do weird things if i have do it in Stand-By for a night, remind this is one of my first songs.
Id say that overall it was a pretty good song. (others might dissagree but o-well... :P )
I was listening to your other songs and then I came to this one and I was like... HOLY CRAP!!! There was an increase in skill... And then I thought that maybe you stoll the song from somewhere and I thought that it didnt sound like it was...
There was just one part in the song that kinda went to 'shit mode' (sorry). Then it went good again. The part was when it stopped and there was that reversed crash and everything started building back up. It was just kinda... Well... Lame (Im not saying that I can do any better).
Besides all of that I'd say to work on DIVERSITY (word of the week). Just add a new idea into it (you kinda did), but I mean change the melody.
Good job man and I hope to hear more of your stuff!!! :)
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